A few changes as outlined below (#10397)

1. In the first sentence "TDengine includes server, client, and ecological software ..." I propose changing the word "ecological" to "ecosystem"
2. Change "After 2.4" to "Starting with 2.4"
3. Change "including RESTful service" to "and includes a RESTful service"
4. Change "early version" to "earlier version"
5. Change "For the time being, using Docker to deploy the client or server of TDengine for production environments is not recommended." to "For the time being, we do not recommend using Docker to deploy the TDengine server or client in production environments."
6. Change "TDengine is very easy to install, from download to successful installation in just a few seconds." to "TDengine is very easy to run; download to successful installation takes just a few seconds."
7. Split the second sentence in the Install from Package section into 2 sentences with a period instead of ";"
8. Under Quick Launch, change "Then check if the service is working now." to "Then check if the system is working."
9. Under TDengine Shell Command Line change "Besides the SQL commands" to "Besides executing SQL commands"

documentation20/en/02.getting-started/docs.md

@@ -2,7 +2,7 @@
 
 ## <a class="anchor" id="install"></a>Quick Install
 
-TDengine includes server, client, and ecological software and peripheral tools. Currently, version 2.0 of the server can only be installed and run on Linux and will support Windows, macOS, and other OSes in the future. The client can be installed and run on Windows or Linux. Applications on any operating system can use the RESTful interface to connect to the taosd server. After 2.4, TDengine includes taosAdapter to provide an easy-to-use and efficient way to ingest data including RESTful service. taosAdapter needs to be started manually as a stand-alone component. The early version uses an embedded HTTP component to provide the RESTful interface.
+TDengine includes server, client, and ecosystem software and peripheral tools. Currently, version 2.0 of the server can only be installed and run on Linux and will support Windows, macOS, and other OSes in the future. The client can be installed and run on Windows or Linux. Applications on any operating system can use the RESTful interface to connect to the taosd server. Starting with 2.4, TDengine includes taosAdapter to provide an easy-to-use and efficient way to ingest data and includes a RESTful service. taosAdapter needs to be started manually as a stand-alone component. The earlier version uses an embedded HTTP component to provide the RESTful interface.
 
 TDengine supports X64/ARM64/MIPS64/Alpha64 hardware platforms and will support ARM32, RISC-V, and other CPU architectures in the future.
 
@@ -14,11 +14,11 @@ docker run -d -p 6030-6049:6030-6049 -p 6030-6049:6030-6049/udp tdengine/tdengin
 
 Please refer to [Quickly Taste TDengine with Docker](https://www.taosdata.com/en/documentation/getting-started/docker) for the details.
 
-For the time being, using Docker to deploy the client or server of TDengine for production environments is not recommended. However it is a convenient way to deploy TDengine for development purposes. In particular, it is easy to try TDengine in Mac OS X and Windows environments with Docker.
+For the time being, we do not recommend using Docker to deploy the TDengine server or client in production environments. However it is a convenient way to deploy TDengine for development purposes. In particular, it is easy to try TDengine in Mac OS X and Windows environments with Docker.
 
 ### <a class="anchor" id="package-install"></a>Install from Package
 
-TDengine is very easy to install, from download to successful installation in just a few seconds. For ease of use, the standard server installation package includes the client application and sample code; if you only need the server application and C/C++ language support for the client connection, you can also download the lite version of the installation package only. The installation packages are available in `rpm` and `deb` formats, as well as `tar.gz` format for enterprise customers who need to facilitate use on specific operating systems. Releases include both stable and beta releases. We recommend the stable release for production use or testing. The beta release may contain more new features. You can choose to download from the following as needed:
+TDengine is very easy to run; download to successful installation takes just a few seconds. For ease of use, the standard server installation package includes the client application and sample code. But if you only need the server application and C/C++ language support for the client connection, you can also download only the lite version of the installation package. The installation packages are available in `rpm` and `deb` formats, as well as `tar.gz` format for enterprise customers who need to facilitate use on specific operating systems. Releases include both stable and beta releases. We recommend the stable release for production use or testing. The beta release may contain more new features. You can choose to download from the following as needed:
 
 <ul id="server-packageList" class="package-list"></ul>
 
@@ -59,13 +59,13 @@ After installation, you can start the TDengine service by the `systemctl` comman
 systemctl start taosd
 ```
 
-Then check if the service is working now.
+Then check if the service is working.
 
 ```bash
 systemctl status taosd
 ```
 
-If the service is running successfully, you can play around through TDengine shell `taos`.
+If the service is running successfully, you can play around through the TDengine shell, `taos`.
 
 **Note:**
 
@@ -120,7 +120,7 @@ ts     |  speed  |
 Query OK, 2 row(s) in set (0.001700s)
 ```
 
-Besides the SQL commands, the system administrator can check system status, add or delete accounts, and manage the servers.
+Besides executing SQL commands, the system administrator can check system status, add or delete accounts, and manage the servers.
 
 ### Shell Command Line Parameters