From 9012985cf8c9c067cbbb0fe985f3f35cdb710225 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Harald Kirschner Date: Mon, 26 Jul 2021 09:31:55 -0700 Subject: [PATCH] Improve wording for telemetry settings --- src/vs/platform/telemetry/common/telemetryService.ts | 4 ++-- src/vs/workbench/electron-sandbox/desktop.contribution.ts | 2 +- 2 files changed, 3 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-) diff --git a/src/vs/platform/telemetry/common/telemetryService.ts b/src/vs/platform/telemetry/common/telemetryService.ts index a1e68d17aad..f916a4a1608 100644 --- a/src/vs/platform/telemetry/common/telemetryService.ts +++ b/src/vs/platform/telemetry/common/telemetryService.ts @@ -220,8 +220,8 @@ Registry.as(Extensions.Configuration).registerConfigurat 'type': 'boolean', 'markdownDescription': !product.privacyStatementUrl ? - localize('telemetry.enableTelemetry', "Enable usage data and errors to be sent to a Microsoft online service.") : - localize('telemetry.enableTelemetryMd', "Enable usage data and errors to be sent to a Microsoft online service. Read our privacy statement [here]({0}).", product.privacyStatementUrl), + localize('telemetry.enableTelemetry', "Enable diagnostic data to be collected. This helps us to better understand how {0} is performing and where improvements need to be made.", product.nameLong) : + localize('telemetry.enableTelemetryMd', "Enable diagnostic data to be collected. This helps us to better understand how {0} is performing and where improvements need to be made. [Read more]({1}) about what we collect and our privacy statement.", product.nameLong, product.privacyStatementUrl), 'default': true, 'restricted': true, 'scope': ConfigurationScope.APPLICATION, diff --git a/src/vs/workbench/electron-sandbox/desktop.contribution.ts b/src/vs/workbench/electron-sandbox/desktop.contribution.ts index 2f06ca1b1ef..0d5532643ed 100644 --- a/src/vs/workbench/electron-sandbox/desktop.contribution.ts +++ b/src/vs/workbench/electron-sandbox/desktop.contribution.ts @@ -231,7 +231,7 @@ import { EditorsVisibleContext, SingleEditorGroupsContext } from 'vs/workbench/c 'properties': { 'telemetry.enableCrashReporter': { 'type': 'boolean', - 'description': localize('telemetry.enableCrashReporting', "Enable crash reports to be sent to a Microsoft online service. \nThis option requires restart to take effect."), + 'description': localize('telemetry.enableCrashReporting', "Enable crash reports to be collected. This helps us improve stability. \nThis option requires restart to take effect."), 'default': true, 'tags': ['usesOnlineServices', 'telemetry'] } -- GitLab