From 3b167dfaefaf512aab110a11a14b97d28c04dafc Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Justin Clift <jclift@redhat.com>
Date: Mon, 13 Sep 2010 17:28:49 +1000
Subject: [PATCH] docs: improve wording for the dev guide

Wording tweak suggested by David Jorm, author of the libvirt App Dev Guide.
---
 docs/devguide.html.in  | 14 +++++++-------
 docs/downloads.html.in | 14 +++++++-------
 2 files changed, 14 insertions(+), 14 deletions(-)

diff --git a/docs/devguide.html.in b/docs/devguide.html.in
index 409952e4f7..6c51c36f64 100644
--- a/docs/devguide.html.in
+++ b/docs/devguide.html.in
@@ -4,16 +4,16 @@
     <h1>libvirt Application Development Guide</h1>
 
     <p>
-      This is both a guide to developing with libvirt, and a useful
-      reference document.  It is a work in progress, contributed to by the
-      members of the libvirt team and being authored by a professional
-      author.
+      The guide is both a learning tool for developing with libvirt and an
+      API reference document. It is a work in progress, composed by a
+      professional author from contributions written by members of the
+      libvirt team.
     </p>
 
     <p>
-      Contributors to this are <b>VERY</b> welcome, so if you'd like to
-      get your name in this and demonstrate your virtualisation prowess,
-      contributing solidly to the content here will do it. :)
+      Contributions to the guide are <b>VERY</b> welcome. If you'd like to get
+      your name on this and demonstrate your virtualisation prowess, a solid
+      contribution to the content here will do it. :)
     </p>
 
     <h2>Browsable online</h2>
diff --git a/docs/downloads.html.in b/docs/downloads.html.in
index 66b99e11de..2ce10486b0 100644
--- a/docs/downloads.html.in
+++ b/docs/downloads.html.in
@@ -49,16 +49,16 @@
     <h1>libvirt Application Development Guide</h1>
 
     <p>
-      This is both a guide to developing with libvirt, and a useful
-      reference document.  It is a work in progress, contributed to by the
-      members of the libvirt team and being authored by a professional
-      author.
+      The guide is both a learning tool for developing with libvirt and an
+      API reference document. It is a work in progress, composed by a
+      professional author from contributions written by members of the
+      libvirt team.
     </p>
 
     <p>
-      Contributors to this are <b>VERY</b> welcome, so if you'd like to
-      get your name in this and demonstrate your virtualisation prowess,
-      contributing solidly to the content here will do it. :)
+      Contributions to the guide are <b>VERY</b> welcome. If you'd like to get
+      your name on this and demonstrate your virtualisation prowess, a solid
+      contribution to the content here will do it. :)
     </p>
 
     <h2>Downloadable PDF</h2>
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