From 1f2f055bc3d0eb4b8e6dd3fcff23ff9744f7b84c Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: =?UTF-8?q?Ville=20Skytt=C3=A4?= Date: Thu, 3 May 2018 13:14:19 +0200 Subject: [PATCH] docs: Grammar and spelling fixes MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=UTF-8 Content-Transfer-Encoding: 8bit Signed-off-by: Ville Skyttä --- docs/aclpolkit.html.in | 2 +- docs/api.html.in | 2 +- docs/contribute.html.in | 2 +- docs/downloads.html.in | 2 +- docs/drvbhyve.html.in | 2 +- docs/drvesx.html.in | 2 +- docs/drvlxc.html.in | 2 +- docs/errors.html.in | 2 +- docs/firewall.html.in | 2 +- docs/formatdomain.html.in | 12 ++++++------ docs/formatdomaincaps.html.in | 2 +- docs/internals/rpc.html.in | 2 +- docs/locking-sanlock.html.in | 2 +- docs/news.xml | 2 +- docs/storage.html.in | 2 +- docs/support.html.in | 2 +- 16 files changed, 21 insertions(+), 21 deletions(-) diff --git a/docs/aclpolkit.html.in b/docs/aclpolkit.html.in index 0e3c8e971f..ee00b98461 100644 --- a/docs/aclpolkit.html.in +++ b/docs/aclpolkit.html.in @@ -396,7 +396,7 @@ polkit.addRule(function(action, subject) { To achieve this we need to write a rule which checks whether the connect_driver attribute is LXC and the domain_name - attribute is demo, and match on a action + attribute is demo, and match on an action name of org.libvirt.api.domain.getattr. Using the javascript rules format, this ends up written as

diff --git a/docs/api.html.in b/docs/api.html.in index 27abed6732..288b9ecf88 100644 --- a/docs/api.html.in +++ b/docs/api.html.in @@ -155,7 +155,7 @@
  • Enumeration [virConnectList..., virConnectNumOf...] -

    Used to enumerate a set of object available to an given +

    Used to enumerate a set of object available to a given hypervisor connection such as:

    • diff --git a/docs/contribute.html.in b/docs/contribute.html.in index 158c91cb6f..42a1b2fe60 100644 --- a/docs/contribute.html.in +++ b/docs/contribute.html.in @@ -80,7 +80,7 @@ and future growth of the project, that there are a people who evangalise the work created by the project. This can take many forms, writing blog posts (about usage of features, - personal user experiances, areas for future work, and more), + personal user experiences, areas for future work, and more), syndicating docs and blogs via social media, giving user group and/or conference talks about libvirt.
    • User assistance. Since documentation diff --git a/docs/downloads.html.in b/docs/downloads.html.in index 8cca203e54..2956a4f60e 100644 --- a/docs/downloads.html.in +++ b/docs/downloads.html.in @@ -457,7 +457,7 @@ (first release in the middle of Jan, then skip the Feb release), giving a total of 11 releases a year. The Python and Perl modules will aim to release at the same time as the core libvirt module. Other modules have - independant ad-hoc releases with no fixed time schedle. + independent ad-hoc releases with no fixed time schedule.

      Release numbering

      diff --git a/docs/drvbhyve.html.in b/docs/drvbhyve.html.in index 63260afae7..bde8298a52 100644 --- a/docs/drvbhyve.html.in +++ b/docs/drvbhyve.html.in @@ -239,7 +239,7 @@ to let a guest boot or start a guest using:

      start --console domname
      -

      NB: An bootloader configured to require user interaction will prevent +

      NB: A bootloader configured to require user interaction will prevent the domain from starting (and thus virsh console or start --console from functioning) until the user interacts with it manually on the VM host. Because users typically do not have access to the VM host, diff --git a/docs/drvesx.html.in b/docs/drvesx.html.in index 417aca4d79..901d65958a 100644 --- a/docs/drvesx.html.in +++ b/docs/drvesx.html.in @@ -437,7 +437,7 @@ ethernet0.checkMACAddress = "false"

      auto
      - This isn't a actual controller model. If specified the ESX driver + This isn't an actual controller model. If specified the ESX driver tries to detect the SCSI controller model referenced in the .vmdk file and use it. Autodetection fails when a SCSI controller has multiple disks attached and the SCSI controller diff --git a/docs/drvlxc.html.in b/docs/drvlxc.html.in index 44c49609d9..6ee9ee8646 100644 --- a/docs/drvlxc.html.in +++ b/docs/drvlxc.html.in @@ -429,7 +429,7 @@ be considered secure against exploits of the host OS. The sVirt SELinux driver provides a way to secure containers even when the "user" namespace is not used. The cost is that writing a policy to allow execution of arbitrary OS is not practical. The SELinux sVirt policy is typically -tailored to work with an simpler application confinement use case, +tailored to work with a simpler application confinement use case, as provided by the "libvirt-sandbox" project.

      diff --git a/docs/errors.html.in b/docs/errors.html.in index 8f4f7d4323..ea4272822f 100644 --- a/docs/errors.html.in +++ b/docs/errors.html.in @@ -29,7 +29,7 @@ set specifically to a connection with

      call it with the error information
    • otherwise call virDefaultErrorFunc which is the default error function of the library issuing the error on stderr
    • save the error in the connection for later retrieval with virConnGetLastError
    • -
    • otherwise like when failing to create an hypervisor connection: +
    • otherwise like when failing to create a hypervisor connection:
      1. if there is a global callback set with virSetErrorFunc, call it with the error information
      2. otherwise call virDefaultErrorFunc which is the default error function of the library issuing the error diff --git a/docs/firewall.html.in b/docs/firewall.html.in index 11c3c8148e..0a50687c26 100644 --- a/docs/firewall.html.in +++ b/docs/firewall.html.in @@ -11,7 +11,7 @@
        • The virtual network driver

          - This provides a isolated bridge device (ie no physical NICs + This provides an isolated bridge device (ie no physical NICs enslaved). Guest TAP devices are attached to this bridge. Guests can talk to each other and the host, and optionally the wider world. diff --git a/docs/formatdomain.html.in b/docs/formatdomain.html.in index 8e864f7113..b65fea084d 100644 --- a/docs/formatdomain.html.in +++ b/docs/formatdomain.html.in @@ -622,7 +622,7 @@ order allows to specify the order to add the online vcpus. For hypervisors/platforms that require to insert multiple vcpus at once - the order may be duplicated accross all vcpus that need to be + the order may be duplicated across all vcpus that need to be enabled at once. Specifying order is not necessary, vcpus are then added in an arbitrary order. If order info is used, it must be used for all online vcpus. Hypervisors may clear or update ordering information @@ -4058,7 +4058,7 @@ pcie-switch-upstream-port, and of course for this to work properly, you will need to decrease the pcie-expander-bus' busNr accordingly so that there are enough unused bus - numbers above it to accomodate giving out one bus number for + numbers above it to accommodate giving out one bus number for the upstream-port and one for each downstream-port (in addition to the pcie-root-port and the pcie-expander-bus itself). @@ -4212,7 +4212,7 @@
          This is the fully qualified path of the file associated with the lockspace. The offset specifies where the lease is stored within the file. If the lock manager does not - require a offset, just pass 0. + require an offset, just pass 0.
          @@ -4867,7 +4867,7 @@ (Since 0.10.0). For example, in order to work properly with both an 802.1Qbh switch and an Open vSwitch switch, you may choose to specify no type, but both - an profileid (in case the switch is 802.1Qbh) and + a profileid (in case the switch is 802.1Qbh) and an interfaceid (in case the switch is Open vSwitch) (you may also omit the other attributes, such as managerid, typeid, or profileid, to be filled in from the @@ -6174,7 +6174,7 @@ qemu-kvm -net nic,model=? /dev/null set to an empty string, then VNC access is disabled. The keymap attribute specifies the keymap to use. It is possible to set a limit on the validity of the password by giving - an timestamp passwdValidTo='2010-04-09T15:51:00' + a timestamp passwdValidTo='2010-04-09T15:51:00' assumed to be in UTC. The connected attribute allows control of connected client during password changes. VNC accepts keep value only since 0.9.3. @@ -6216,7 +6216,7 @@ qemu-kvm -net nic,model=? /dev/null passwd attribute is set to an empty string, then SPICE access is disabled. The keymap attribute specifies the keymap to use. It is possible to set a limit on - the validity of the password by giving an timestamp + the validity of the password by giving a timestamp passwdValidTo='2010-04-09T15:51:00' assumed to be in UTC.

          diff --git a/docs/formatdomaincaps.html.in b/docs/formatdomaincaps.html.in index 6bfcaf61ca..027e115645 100644 --- a/docs/formatdomaincaps.html.in +++ b/docs/formatdomaincaps.html.in @@ -81,7 +81,7 @@

          CPU Allocation

          -

          Before any devices capability occurs, there might be a info on domain +

          Before any devices capability occurs, there might be info on domain wide capabilities, e.g. virtual CPUs:

          diff --git a/docs/internals/rpc.html.in b/docs/internals/rpc.html.in
          index fca9cb784e..048192f818 100644
          --- a/docs/internals/rpc.html.in
          +++ b/docs/internals/rpc.html.in
          @@ -133,7 +133,7 @@
                 
                 
          serial
          - This is an number that starts from 1 and increases + This is a number that starts from 1 and increases each time a method call packet is sent. A reply or stream packet will have a serial number matching the original method call packet serial. Events always diff --git a/docs/locking-sanlock.html.in b/docs/locking-sanlock.html.in index 9b3656189e..3ee9849e87 100644 --- a/docs/locking-sanlock.html.in +++ b/docs/locking-sanlock.html.in @@ -76,7 +76,7 @@ SANLOCKOPTS="-w 0" configuration file for each libvirt driver that is using sanlock. For QEMU, we will edit /etc/libvirt/qemu-sanlock.conf There is one mandatory parameter that needs to be set, - the host_id. This is a integer between + the host_id. This is an integer between 1 and 2000, which must be set to a unique value on each host running virtual machines.

          diff --git a/docs/news.xml b/docs/news.xml index d67d5a73d0..80181415c6 100644 --- a/docs/news.xml +++ b/docs/news.xml @@ -1206,7 +1206,7 @@ The vgaconf attribute was added to video's driver element. Possible values are: on, - off, and io. It controlls the way how + off, and io. It controls the way how bhyve exposes video devices to its guests; various guest OSes might require different settings to boot properly. diff --git a/docs/storage.html.in b/docs/storage.html.in index 3f1aec1ead..1906aa6cd4 100644 --- a/docs/storage.html.in +++ b/docs/storage.html.in @@ -759,7 +759,7 @@ This provides a pool based on Virtuozzo storage. Virtuozzo Storage is a highly available distributed software-defined storage with built-in replication and disaster recovery. More detailed information about - Virtuozzo storage and its managment can be found here: + Virtuozzo storage and its management can be found here: Virtuozzo Storage).

          diff --git a/docs/support.html.in b/docs/support.html.in index 1a9438ff43..38f2f906e0 100644 --- a/docs/support.html.in +++ b/docs/support.html.in @@ -199,7 +199,7 @@ return an error indicating it is not supported. Likewise libvirt will make reasonable efforts to keep API calls working across hypervisor releases even if the underlying implementation changes. In cases where - this is impossible, an suitable error will be reported. The list of + this is impossible, a suitable error will be reported. The list of APIs which have implementations is detailed separately.

          -- GitLab