Update How-to-connect-remote-service.md

docs/en/guides/How-to-connect-remote-service.md

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 Telepresence is an open source tool that lets you run a single service locally, while connecting that service to a remote Kubernetes cluster.
 
-We can use telepresence to help us run kubesphere apiserver locally.
+We can use telepresence to help us running KubeSphere apiserver locally.
 
 
 ## 1. Install telepresence
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 ## 2. Run telepresence
 
-Open your command line and run the command `telepresence`, telepresence will help you to enter a bash connected to a remote kubernetes cluster.
+Open your command line and run the command `telepresence`, telepresence will help you to enter a bash connected to a remote Kubernetes cluster.
 
 Test telepresence with KubeSphere apigateway:
+
 ```bash
 
 @kubernetes-admin@cluster.local|bash-3.2$ curl http://ks-apigateway.kubesphere-system