Correcting grammatical mistakes in model format design doc (#5087)

doc/design/model_format.md

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 ## Motivation
 
-The model is the output of training process. One complete model consists of two parts, namely, the **topology** and the **parameters**. To support industrial deployment, we need to make the model format must be self-completed and do not expose any training source code.
+A model is an output of the training process. One complete model consists of two parts, the **topology** and the **parameters**. In order to support industrial deployment, the model format must be self-complete and must not expose any training source code.
 
-As a result, In PaddlePaddle, the **topology** represents as a  [ProgramDesc](https://github.com/PaddlePaddle/Paddle/blob/1c0a4c901c9fc881d120249c703b15d1c50dae7d/doc/design/program.md), which describes the model structure. The **parameters** contain all the trainable weights in the model, we must support large size parameter, and efficient serialization/deserialization. 
+As a result, In PaddlePaddle, the **topology** is represented as a  [ProgramDesc](https://github.com/PaddlePaddle/Paddle/blob/1c0a4c901c9fc881d120249c703b15d1c50dae7d/doc/design/program.md), which describes the model structure. The **parameters** contain all the trainable weights in the model. We must support large size parameters and efficient serialization/deserialization of parameters. 
 
 ## Implementation
 
-The topology is saved as a plain text, in detail, a self-contain protobuf file. 
+The topology is saved as a plain text in a detailed self-contain protobuf file. 
 
-The parameters are saved as a binary file. As we all know, the protobuf message has the limits of [64M size](https://developers.google.com/protocol-buffers/docs/reference/cpp/google.protobuf.io.coded_stream#CodedInputStream.SetTotalBytesLimit.details). We do a (benchmark experiment)[https://github.com/PaddlePaddle/Paddle/pull/4610], its result shows protobuf is not fit in this scene.
+The parameters are saved as a binary file. As we all know, the protobuf message has a limit of [64M size](https://developers.google.com/protocol-buffers/docs/reference/cpp/google.protobuf.io.coded_stream#CodedInputStream.SetTotalBytesLimit.details). We have done a [benchmark experiment](https://github.com/PaddlePaddle/Paddle/pull/4610), which shows that protobuf is not fit for the task.
 
-As a result, we design a particular format for tensor serialization. By default, arbitrary tensor in Paddle is a [LoDTensor](https://github.com/PaddlePaddle/Paddle/blob/develop/paddle/framework/lod_tensor.md), and has a description information proto of (LoDTensorDesc)[https://github.com/PaddlePaddle/Paddle/blob/develop/paddle/framework/framework.proto#L99]. We save the DescProto as the byte string header, it contains the necessary information, such as the `dims`, the `name` of the tensor, and the `LoD` information in [LoDTensor](https://github.com/PaddlePaddle/Paddle/blob/1c0a4c901c9fc881d120249c703b15d1c50dae7d/paddle/framework/lod_tensor.md). Tensor stores value in a continuous memory buffer, for speed we dump the raw memory to disk and save it as the byte string content. So, the binary format of one tensor is, 
+As a result, we design a particular format for tensor serialization. By default, an arbitrary tensor in Paddle is a [LoDTensor](https://github.com/PaddlePaddle/Paddle/blob/develop/paddle/framework/lod_tensor.md), and has a description information proto of [LoDTensorDesc](https://github.com/PaddlePaddle/Paddle/blob/develop/paddle/framework/framework.proto#L99). We save the DescProto as the byte string header. It contains all the necessary information, such as the `dims`, the `name` of the tensor, and the `LoD` information in [LoDTensor](https://github.com/PaddlePaddle/Paddle/blob/1c0a4c901c9fc881d120249c703b15d1c50dae7d/paddle/framework/lod_tensor.md). A tensor stores values in a continuous memory buffer. For speed we dump the raw memory to disk and save it as the byte string content. So, the binary format of one tensor is, 
 
 |HeaderLength|ContentLength|**LoDTensorDesc**|**TensorValue**|
 
-In detail, tensor's  byte view as the table shows. Note that all the signed value written in little-endian.
+The table below shows a tensor's byte view in detail. Note that all the signed values are written in the little-endian format.
 
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@@ -33,4 +33,6 @@ In detail, tensor's  byte view as the table shows. Note that all the signed valu
 
 ## Summary
 
-We introduce the model format, the `ProgramDesc` describe the **topology**, and a bunch of particular format binary tensors describes the **parameters**.
+- We introduce a model format.
+- The `ProgramDesc` describe the model **topology**. 
+- A bunch of specified format binary tensors describe the **parameters**.